Dr. Tick Tock

Yes! That was it! Oh gosh, thank you guys so much! (And I'm sorry, I never quite knew what those were called... )

I'm terribly sorry, this is a completely random question. Several years back, in one of the 'News' things on YWS, one of the mods promoted a livejournal (if it wasn't ...

Thank you ^___^

Specifically looking for: .Character critique .Plot critique Please keep that in mind =] Memoirs of a Demon :::: Demons have so many stereotypes its hard not to be one. But ...

Oh, thanks so much guys! Since most of you said this chapter was pointless, I'm revising it quite a bit. More description of the city will be given, Evalen's appearance ...

Another note before you begin (this is the second part of chapter one). I changed Asher's name to Kodi. For personal reasons, and also because there is a semi-new book ...

PINK = grammar/spelling mistake RED = something I personally thought was awkward, confusing, etc BLUE = my corrections/comments/thoughts. Sometimes next to the pink/red, other times commenting on rand

Okay, I'm going to start working on this, but it might take a while. I'd like to say, right now, that I hate both romance and mystery novels, but something ...

Okay, I promised I wouldn't post back in this one, but-- This isn't the prologue. I gave you a link back to the prologue, which I had posted previously on ...

Before I begin- or, rather, you begin- I want to mention that for some reason this chapter was a pain in the arse to get out, and I struggled with ...

If you're wondering why no one has posted to this, it's because it's absolutely stunning. Haikus, in my opinion, are hard to work with because they're too short for me ...

Interesting. That's my word for this particular piece. Unique, at least to the poetry I have read in my life. First thing that nagged me- because their there.. Their should ...

Hello Ayumi! To begin with, I must say I really like the title. I don't know Spanish, past "Hola" and "Si", but foreign language always catches my attention, and that's ...

Ohhh! Many many many thanks for the critique! It was amazingly helpful! I never noticed my long, adjective-suffocated sentences before, but I definitely see your point. I think it has ...

Wow. Jan and In The Moonlight have covered pretty much all the specific stuff I was going to say. Yay! (It's almost one a.m. and I'm glad for that weight ...